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I altered some of the combat encounters and also added additional ones. The player particularly mentioned the initial scene I created, wherein the party's failure to beat off an attack in time results in a low-yield nuke detonating and killing McGuffin Man (the mysterious uncle whose death sets off the campaign and who originally dies off-screen prior to campaign start). He felt this gave them all a much stronger reason for taking on the adventure, as each PC felt at least some degree of guilt for his death.

Given this Pull, I was able to tone down the original Push: instead of the Empire chasing them loudly and openly, it became the other heirs chasing them carefully and quietly. 

(And - yes - I am aware that in the original adventure McGuffin Man doesn't really die. I planned to handle that with a computer simulation of him at the relevant point. But it never became necessary, due to the group's break-up.)

But what made the strongest impression was my roleplaying of various NPCs, both important and not so important. IIRC, the original initial encounter of the campaign is a congregation of the various heirs (licit and illicit) of McGuffin Man. I went all out in that scene, playing the (male) cult leader as Tammy Faye Bakker (complete with hideous make-up) and the maybe-girlfriend as Lady Macbeth. Later on, they had occasion to encounter the Imperial Legate of a low-pop mining world and given that this was a backwater uninhabitable world, I played him as Londo Mollari from the first season of Babylon 5, posted there as punishment and therefore spending most of his conscious hours drunk.

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