Overall
various bits of tidying to layout – better subtitles, bullet point layout etc.
00 Secrets of Secrets
ragged right margin now justified throughout
p.1 para 1 “you’re” “you’ll” changed to “you are” and “you will”; paragraph bold gone
p.1 para 3 “ten linked” now “10 linked”
p.2 para 1 “hundred” now “100” (but “300,000” remains)
p.2 para 3 new paragraph break
p.2 para 5 “SEVEN” now “Seven”
p.3 para 5 “SEVEN” now “Seven”
p.3 para 3 “three hundred thousand” now “300,000”
p.3 para 7 “Arisa” now italics not bold
p.4 para 7 “ten” now “10”;
p.4 para 8 “adventure doesn’t end there” now “does not end there”
p.5 para 0 “wasn’t popular” now “was not popular”
p.6 para 1 “excellent rolls from suitably skilled player characters” now “excellent rolls from 2 suitably Player Characters” (number added and case change)
p.7 para 9 “Kirunir-class” still “Kirunir-class” (i.e. not corrected to Kinunir-class)
p.8 para 8 “SEVEN” now “Seven”
01 Bodysnatchers
Title was “Bodysnatchers” now “Body Snatchers”
p.1 para 2 “twenty” now “20”; “hundred” now “100”
p.2 para 4-6 all now in italics (i.e. all the death notice text)
p.2 para 9 “five thousand” now “5,000”
p.3 full page illustration (of starship and planet) removed
p.5 italics removed from description of Public Order Office
p.6 para 3 “We’re Bring Watched” uncorrected
p.7 para 4 “See Assassins!, page XX for more details.” removed
p.7 para 7 italics added to Vlen’s message
p.8 para 13-15 bold of two of the questions now missing making the book harder to read
p.8 para 16 full stop at end of box now added
p.9 para 1 “We’re Being Watched” now “We are Being Watched”
p.10 para 2 “duke’ s” spacing error still not corrected
p.10 “5. Bathrooms” and “12. Bedrooms” bold now missing (i.e. errors introduced)
p.10 “15. Lounge” – “player characters” now “Player Characters”
p.10 last paragraph – italics now gone, other italics of subsequent Tea and History paragraphs gone
p.11-12 images reduced to fit onto one page, not two
p.13 “hundred” now “100”
p.14 para 2 “player characters” now “Player Characters”
p.14 italics removed from character reading
p.15 para 4 “player characters” now “Player Characters”
p.15 para 5 “both” in italics now bold not italics
p.15 para 9 “fifteen” now “15”
p.16 para 0 “seventeen tons” now “Seventeen tons”
p.16 para 2 “player characters” now “Player Characters”
p.16 italics removed from Startown Nights
p.20 italics removed from conversation text
p.22 italics removed from getting to the station
p.26 alphabetical entry order corrected
02 Homecoming
p.18 deck plans for the 200-ton Star Hunter gone
p.20-21 deck plans and stats for the 1000-ton Alahir gone
No rush, I'm not going to be starting it for a couple of weeks so any time will be fine :-)
On 19/05/14 22:19, Timothy Collinson wrote:
On 19 May 2014, at 19:36, David Shaw <dj.shaw@btconnect.com> wrote:
I got hold of this adventure when it was being offered as a freebie in several parts on DriveThruRPG. I now see that it is available to buy and was wondering if it's worth shelling out the cash, as I'm intending to start running it with a group of new-ish Travellers. Are there any major changes, or have they just cleaned it up, corrected the typos, completed the sentences which stop mid-flow?
There definitely are some variations (I can't recall if they were
actually improvements or just changes). I thought I had notes on the
differences but I'm not finding them quickly. Will have a look
tomorrow evening if that's ok. It's getting a bit at now. Don't let
me forget :-)
tc
David Shaw
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